today my class was fiddling with sites they have no idea how to use but I did. here is what I made:

have you ever used Voki before? I would love feedback from you. 

T3 W3: Bye, Bye Witch

Bye, Bye Witch

By: Gloria.L.H

In the clear waters of the ocean plays a scaly dragon jumping as
swiftly as a leopard though the waves. His green eyes shines and
reflects light like the moon, having scales shimmering brightly as if
he was a part of the ocean dancing under the sun. He leaps highly
onto white, puffy clouds to have a nap. Just when he was going to
drift of into his dreams, BANG BANG BANG!

Suddenly he heard a sound that made his tail twitch eagerly. He
cautiously approached the banging sound and found a house with
wood chips falling to the ground. There was mold seeking from the
wood.  

Drakeon the dragon strode around the corner and spotted a window
with cobwebs as curtains. He peered through the cobwebbed curtains
barely covering the inside, surprised. He glared inside and eyed a
witch stirring a villainous bubbly potion.

The witch had pitch black hair that looks like it hasn’t been washed
in years, in other words never. Her eyes were as cold as ice, her nose
stretched forward with a pimple in the middle. Her mouth froze in a
frown, and her outfit had patches and rips all her dress. The witch’s
tights were a pattern of stripes of orange and black. The shoes she
was wearing was razor sharp and curled upward like a lollipop.

Well he thought it was a witch because it was really hard to see in
the dim candle light. Drakeon was still wondering what the banging
was…

With the time of a blink of an eye the witch spun around as speedy
as a cheetah recognized Drakeon and with a croaky voice she
whispered “I have been waiting to see you in years! And now I can
absorb your power and become victorious!” ‘Oh no!’ Drakeon
thought, without thinking he opened his jaw and blew a flame of fire
in the witch’s pointy nose.

Seconds later the furious witch flew into dark rage, panicking
Drakeon started to sprint at lightning speed, then spread his silver
wings and started to drift as if he were a plane and zoomed past the
clouds.

Just then did he notice his home and dived in and slammed the door
shut with his psychic powers. He peeped out of the window and
when he knew it was safe he went to bed. BANG BANG BANG! ‘No,
not again’ Drakeon thought.

The Prince and the Albatross

The Prince and the Albatross




This is my reading work, may you please tell me what I should do next?