T3 W8: Connected 3; Harnessing the Wind

docking day blooms

Docking Day Blooms

Knowledge A

1. Aunty Mollie
2. Mikey
3. Uncle Tama
4. Lambs
5. Auntys
6. ‘We’
7. Mother Sheep
8. Dogs
9. Driver

Comprehension

Application A

1. I am not alive
2. I can be big or small but always can fit a person
3. I have legs but no arms
4. I have a face
5. I can be in all colours
6. I have steel skin

What am I?

Analyzing A

Happy	Sad	Other
The aunties baked cakes and other  stuff.	Farmers have to cut sheep's tails off. The chocolate van toppled over and crashed.	The kids mostly just played The kids helped the man pick up the chocolate.

New Ideas B

Evaluation  A

I rate this text 10 out of 10 because of it’s great vocabulary and description, the only thing I want is the text to be longer.

New Ideas B

Passion Project - Reading 2017

Day in Spring T4 W6

Day in Spring T4 W6

Day in Spring

Knowledge A

1. Birds

Comprehension B

Application A

1. I am not alive
2. People don’t use me much
3. People never use me when it's raining
4. I use fire
5. I can burn humans
6. I have a lid
7. I am big

Analysing A

Happy:

1. Light sky
2. Sun’s back
3. Tonight we’ll try the barbecue

Sad:

1. Maybe frostbite
2. Difficult to play outdoors
3. Hailstones

Other:

1. Birds in full cry
2. Up at seven
3. Nil breeze
4. Stiff trees

New Ideas B

Evaluation  A

I rate this story 9/10

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