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Thursday, July 5, 2018

docking day blooms

Docking Day Blooms
Knowledge A
  1. Aunty Mollie
  2. Mikey
  3. Uncle Tama
  4. Lambs
  5. Auntys
  6. ‘We’
  7. Mother Sheep
  8. Dogs
  9. Driver


Comprehension
Application A
  1. I am not alive
  2. I can be big or small but always can fit a person
  3. I have legs but no arms
  4. I have a face
  5. I can be in all colours
  6. I have steel skin
What am I?
Analyzing A
Happy
Sad
Other
  1. The aunties baked cakes and other  stuff.
  1. Farmers have to cut sheep's tails off.
  2. The chocolate van toppled over and crashed.
  1. The kids mostly just played
  2. The kids helped the man pick up the chocolate.


New Ideas B
Evaluation  A

I rate this text 10 out of 10 because of it’s great vocabulary and description, the only thing I want is the text to be longer.
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1 comment:

  1. EclipseAugust 21, 2018 at 9:35 AM

    great work gloria my favorit part was all of it maybey next time you could not let it go of the page next time one time i did this to from eclipse

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