Embarrassing Story
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I had a fantastic day then I suddenly remembered that it was one of
my dear friend, Alexia's birthday party! I was excited I finished my
university test at record speed. I skidded to the math teacher like my
legs were stuck to living cheetah legs and handed her the long test,
she looked at me surprised, marked it and passed it back to me. I sat
back down and I noticed that everyone was staring at me with their
beady little eyes. Alexia whispered to me “I didn’t know you could
write so fast!” “yea I didn’t expect that either” I replied with a smile.
my dear friend, Alexia's birthday party! I was excited I finished my
university test at record speed. I skidded to the math teacher like my
legs were stuck to living cheetah legs and handed her the long test,
she looked at me surprised, marked it and passed it back to me. I sat
back down and I noticed that everyone was staring at me with their
beady little eyes. Alexia whispered to me “I didn’t know you could
write so fast!” “yea I didn’t expect that either” I replied with a smile.
After a long, exhausting day of school I got a call from Miriana to
meet her at the back of Jelly (Jellypark) “hey, Gloria meet me in
Jelly at 4:00 with your flash red skates.” exactly after she said that I
replied in a happy tone“ok, but I have to scoot my boot at 5:45 to my
friend´s b-day party.” I speed to my humongous house and slipped on
my rollerblades and rolled to Jelly.
meet her at the back of Jelly (Jellypark) “hey, Gloria meet me in
Jelly at 4:00 with your flash red skates.” exactly after she said that I
replied in a happy tone“ok, but I have to scoot my boot at 5:45 to my
friend´s b-day party.” I speed to my humongous house and slipped on
my rollerblades and rolled to Jelly.
I skated with Miriana till 5:45 and said my farewells, then as fast as
lightning I made it to Alexia's party in the middle of a park, but as
soon as I entered still with my rollerblades on I slipped like a fool and
slided to the wall and smacked my face against it. Alexia turned as
pale as a ball of mozzarella while I turned a bright cherry red, hurled
in a ball and rushed home. That was the last time I was going to go to
a party that year.
lightning I made it to Alexia's party in the middle of a park, but as
soon as I entered still with my rollerblades on I slipped like a fool and
slided to the wall and smacked my face against it. Alexia turned as
pale as a ball of mozzarella while I turned a bright cherry red, hurled
in a ball and rushed home. That was the last time I was going to go to
a party that year.
Hi Gloria its me Isla I was just gonna say good effort on your embarrassing story. It was so hilarious. Maybe when you grow up you could become an author cause that was awesome.
ReplyDeleteHi Glo it's me Maggie. Your story is hysterical and it just makes me laugh when I read the bit "I slipped like a fool."
ReplyDeleteGreat work!